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📜 Important Exam Info

Final Writing Test Task Preparation

This is a mini-task.
Complete this task and T1/T2 before the Writing Test at the end of the year.
All learning goals practiced in task 1, 2 and 3 are tested on the Writing Test.

You are going to…

Write an essay (in steps, a little bit each phase). In it you will:
1 Respond to and analyze the four creative texts you have read this year +
2 You will reflect on to what extent the lesson materials provided and your own contribution have affected your growth.

What is the learning goal?

This assignment is designed for B1-C1 level students to engage in a basic to elaborate (B2/C1) review and critique of four texts studied this year, including three selected books and excerpts from “The Canterbury Tales.”. These are exam requirements. The focus is on developing your literary analysis skills and expressing personal responses to the texts at a higher level than you were able to before.

Rubric

The rubric refers to CEFR goals for analysis and response.
These can be found at CEFR Learning Goal (descriptors) underneath the Mediation text for teachers.

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CriteriaExcellent (9-10)Good (7-8)Satisfactory (5-6)Needs Improvement (1-4)
1 Understanding of Texts (CEFR C2, C1)Demonstrates depth and nuance in understanding, akin to C2/C1 levels.Shows clear understanding, aligning with B2 criteria.Basic understanding, aligning with B1 criteria.Limited understanding; below B1 level.
2 Analytical Skills (CEFR C2, C1, B2)Sophisticated analysis, reflects C2/C1 level skills in appreciating nuances and stylistic elements.Clear analysis, reflects B2 level skills in expressing detailed reactions and interpretations.Basic analysis, aligns with B1 level understanding of character emotions and story events.Analysis below B1 level; lacks depth or detail.
3 Critical Skills (CEFR C2, C1, B2)Detailed, balanced critique reflecting C2/C1 level critical appraisal and evaluation.Reasoned opinion and awareness of thematic elements, as per B2 level.Identifies key episodes and themes at a B1 level.Critique below B1 level; lacks balance or understanding.
4 Personal Response (CEFR C2, C1, B2)Nuanced personal response, demonstrating C2/C1 level insights into character motives and plot development.Clear personal response with detail, as per B2 level emotional response and appreciation.Basic personal response, aligns with B1 level explanation of character identification and emotions.Response below B1 level; lacks depth or engagement.
5 Reflection on Learning Materials Reflects critically and constructively on learning materials, showing self-awareness.Reflects adequately on learning materials with some self-awareness.Basic reflection on learning materials with limited self-awareness.Minimal or no reflection on learning materials.
6 Presentation & Writing Skills (CEFR C2, C1, B2)Cohesive, well-structured with C2/C1 level language use and rhetorical effectiveness.Good structure and clarity, B2 level language use and expression.Satisfactory structure, some language errors, aligns with B1 level.Poor structure, numerous errors, below B1 level.
Cohesion, Coherence, and Structure (CEFR C2, C1, B2)Essay exhibits excellent cohesion and coherence with a clear, logical structure, reflecting C2/C1 level organization and clarity.Good cohesion and coherent structure, aligning with B2 level organization.Satisfactory cohesion and structure, but may have minor lapses; aligns with B1 level.Poor cohesion and structure; below B1 level, making the essay difficult to follow.

Scoring Guide:

  • 9-10 (Excellent): Reflects exceptional understanding and skill, equivalent to C2/C1 levels. (GEMs: at least 5/7 times: 60GEMs)
  • 7-8 (Good): Solid performance, aligns with B2 level expectations. (GEMs: at least 5/7 times: 40GEMs)
  • 5-6 (Satisfactory): Basic competence, aligns with B1 level expectations. (GEMs: at least 7/7 times: 20GEMs)
  • 1-4 (Needs Improvement): Performance below B1 level, requires significant improvement.

Learning Goals (PTA and CEFR)

Please read the PTA (examenprogramma) descriptors below.
In year 5A, this task helps you prepare for important parts of your year 6V exams (related to literature).

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1 Examenprogramma (PTA)-koppeling (focus)

Domein E Literatuur

Subdomein E1: Literaire ontwikkeling

  1. De kandidaat kan beargumenteerd verslag uitbrengen van zijn leeservaringen
    met ten minste drie literaire werken.
    Subdomein E2: Literaire begrippen (alleen vwo)
  2. De kandidaat kan literaire tekstsoorten herkennen en onderscheiden, en
    literaire begrippen hanteren in de interpretatie van literaire teksten.
    Subdomein E3: Literatuurgeschiedenis (alleen vwo)
  3. De kandidaat kan een overzicht geven van de hoofdlijnen van de
    literatuurgeschiedenis en de gelezen literaire werken plaatsen in dit historisch
    perspectief.

2 Examenprogramma (PTA)-koppeling

Domein D: Schrijfvaardigheid

Subdomein D1: Taalvaardigheden

  1. De kandidaat kan:
  • verworven informatie adequaat presenteren met het oog op doel en publiek, en
    daarbij zaken of personen beschrijven en uitdrukking geven aan gevoelens en
    standpunten verwoorden;
  • een verslag schrijven. Voor Engelstalige literatuur.

Subdomein D2: Strategische vaardigheden

  1. De kandidaat kan met behulp van:
  • een tekstverwerkingsprogramma een tekst schrijven;
  • (elektronisch) naslagmateriaal teksten opstellen.
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CEFR

This picture contains all the B2 learning goals as an overview, for reference; to understand all learning goals are part of something larger. It is not necessary to read it. Below, a breakdown of the important descriptors per level and skill are discussed as text.

Now, underneath the picture, we’ve got a more detailed breakdown of what we will work on this specific task. Here we talk about each skill and how it’s used in this task. Check these out to get a clear picture of how your learning journey will look in this task.

B2 Learning Goals

Hey there! If you look to your left, you’ll see a handy picture listing all the B2 learning goals. Don’t worry, you don’t need to cram all of it into your head! This picture breaks down what you’re going to learn for each of the five skills in your pre exam year and exam year. We’ve also got similar pictures for the A1, A2, and B1 levels. A1 and A2 were dealt with in your lower form years such as 2 havo and 2 vwo.


Oh, and one more thing! For your exams, you’ll need to show off your skills at levels B2 through C1 for a bunch of these skills. Check out this page to see what levels you will have to achieve. So it’s really important to understand how this project is setting you up to ace your school exams and the big Centraal Schriftelijk Examen. So, get stuck in and let’s ace these exams together!

Writing

Descriptor

I write notes

I make notes
during lectures,
webinars, debates,
discussions, …/I
write summaries
of literature I have
read
, …

Activity

Descriptor

I write creatively

I write articles for
school newspapers/
review films, books,
…/funny or exciting
stories
, poems, …

Activity

Descriptor

I write a report,
proposal or essay

I write project proposals/accounts with
pros and cons/solutions to problems/
personal opinion
of present day topics/
well-structured essays, …

Activity

Mediating a text (Teacher Text, Explain to Pupils)

Creative texts are one of the main sources for Reading as a leisure activity and there are several
descriptors related to the reading of literature in the scale with that title. However, literature tends to
evoke a reaction, and this is often promoted in language education. This response may be expressed
in a classroom or in one of the amateur literacy circles often associated with foreign language
learning. There are perhaps four main types of classic response:

► engagement: giving a personal reaction to the language, style or content, feeling drawn to an
aspect of the work or a character or characteristic of it;
► interpretation: ascribing meaning or significance to aspects of the work including contents,
motifs, characters’ motives, metaphor, etc.
► analysis of certain aspects of the work including language, literary devices, context,
characters, relationships. etc.
► evaluation: giving a critical appraisal of technique, structure, the vision of the artist, the
significance of the work, etc.

There is a fundamental difference between the first two categories (engagement and interpretation)
and the last two (analysis and evaluation). Describing a personal reaction and interpretation is
cognitively far simpler than giving a more intellectual analysis and/or evaluation. Therefore, two
different scales are offered.

Let’s take a look at both that you need to develop:

Expressing a personal response to creative texts (including literature)

Expressing a personal response to creative texts (including literature): This first scale reflects the
approach taken in school sectors and in adult reading circles. The scale focuses on expression of the
effect a work of literature has on the user/learner as an individual. Key concepts operationalized in this
scale include the following:
► explaining what he/she liked, what interested him/her about the work;
► describing characters, saying which he/she identified with;
► relating aspects of the work to own experience;
► relating feelings and emotions;
► personal interpretation of the work as a whole or of aspects of it.

Progression up the scale is characterised as follows: At the lower levels the user/learner can say
whether he/she liked the work, say how it made him/her feel, talk about characters and relate aspects
of the work to his/her own experience, with increased detail at B1. At B2 he/she can give more
elaborate explanations, comment on the form of expression and style and give his/her interpretation of
the development of a plot, the characters and the themes in a story, novel, film or play. At the C levels,
he/she can give broader and deeper interpretations, supporting them with details and examples.

You (likely) are here (B1):

► Expressing a personal response to creative texts (including literature) B1, hopefully near B2

  • Can explain why certain parts or aspects of a work especially interested him/her/them.
  • Can explain in some detail which character he/she/they most identified with and why.
  • Can relate events in a story, film or play to similar events he/she/they has experienced or heard about.
  • Can relate the emotions experienced by a character in a work to emotions he/she/they has experienced.
  • Can describe the emotions he/she/they experienced at a certain point in a story, e.g. the point(s) in a story when he/she/they became anxious for a character, and explain why.
  • Can explain briefly the feelings and opinions that a work provoked in him/her/them.
  • Can describe the personality of a character.

This is where you need to be by the end of 6A (B2 Writing/Speaking/C1(reading)):

► Expressing a personal response to creative texts (including literature) B2

  • Can give a clear presentation of his/her/their reactions to a work, developing his/her/their ideas and supporting them with examples and arguments.
  • Can describe his/her/their emotional response to a work and elaborate on the way in which it has evoked this response.
  • Can express in some detail his/her/their reactions to the form of expression, style and content of a work, explaining what he/she/they appreciated and why.

► Expressing a personal response to creative texts (including literature) C1

  • Can describe in detail his/her/their personal interpretation of a work, outlining his/her reactions to certain features and explaining their significance.
  • Can outline his/her/their interpretation of a character in a work: their psychological/emotional state, the motives for their actions and the consequences of these actions.
  • Can give his/her/their personal interpretation of the development of a plot, the characters and the themes in a story, novel, film or play.


Analysis and criticism of creative texts (including literature)

Analysis and criticism of creative texts (including literature): This represents an approach more
common at an upper secondary and university level. It concerns more formal, intellectual reactions.
Aspects analysed include the significance of events in a novel, treatment of the same themes in
different works and other links between them, the extent to which a work follows conventions, and
more global evaluation of the work as a whole. Key concepts operationalised in the scale include:
► comparing different works;
► giving a reasoned opinion of a work;
► critically evaluating features of the work, including the effectiveness of techniques employed.

Progression up the scale is characterised as follows: there are no descriptors for A1 and A2. Until B2,
the focus is on description rather than evaluation. At B2, the user/learner can analyse similarities and
differences between works, giving a reasoned opinion and referring to the views of others. At C1,
analysis becomes more subtle, concerned with the way the work engages the audience, the extent to
which it is conventional, whether it employs irony. At C2, the user/learner can recognise finer linguistic
and stylistic subtleties, unpack connotations and give more critical appraisals of the way in which
structure, language and rhetorical devices are exploited in a work of literature for a particular purpose.

You (likely) are here (B1):

► ANALYSIS AND CRITICISM OF CREATIVE TEXTS (INCLUDING LITERATURE) B1, hopefully near B2

  • Can point out the most important episodes and events in a clearly structured narrative in everyday language and explain the significance of events and the connection between them.
  • Can describe the key themes and characters in short narratives involving familiar situations that are written in high frequency everyday language.

This is where you need to be by the end of 6A (B2 Writing/Speaking/C1(reading)):

► ANALYSIS AND CRITICISM OF CREATIVE TEXTS (INCLUDING LITERATURE) B2

  • Can compare two works, considering themes, characters and scenes, exploring similarities and contrasts and explaining the relevance of the connections between them.
  • Can give a reasoned opinion about a work, showing awareness of the thematic, structural and formal features and referring to the opinions and arguments of others.
  • Can evaluate the way the work encourages identification with characters, giving examples.
  • Can describe the way in which different works differ in their treatment of the same theme.

► ANALYSIS AND CRITICISM OF CREATIVE TEXTS (INCLUDING LITERATURE) C1

  • Can critically appraise a wide variety of texts including literary works of different periods and genres.
  • Can evaluate the extent to which a work meets the conventions of its genre.
  • Can describe and comment on ways in which the work engages the audience (e.g. by building up and subverting expectations).

Rewards

The Rewards of This Task🏆

Of course, the reward is becoming more aware of what you have learned and solidify that learning. However, there is also this: valuable feedback for your end-of-year writing test. For the checks below you get 80-100XP in total. Of course, there are GEMs too. Continue reading for find out more.

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The End-of-year writing test 📝

The test at the end of the year covers T1 (starting 2024-2025), T2 and T3. T2 is Channelling Chaucer and T3 is this task. Doing this task helps you prepare very well for the end-of year writing task for which you get a grade. See Magister (study guide) for more information.

GEMs: For the Overachievers 💎

As is the tradition at Let’s Grow!, GEMs are awarded to those who go above and beyond. Consistent use of English during the project will earn you these precious points. But there’s more:

  • Score a 7 for your end-of-year writing test: Earn 25 GEMs
  • Score an 8 for your end-of-year writing test: Earn 50 GEMs
  • Score between a 9 and 10 for your end-of-year writing test: Earn 60 GEMs

And

Check out the rubric because for this task itself you can score 60, 40 or 20 GEMs too. That brings the total to a potential 120GEMs (240XP), which together with the 80-100XP from the checks, brings the total to a potential 340XP (you only need 100XP according to the grade calculator for this task = grade +0.24).

Remember, while XP, grades, and GEMs are incentives, the ultimate reward is your growth as a person🌟.

Vocab

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WordSentence ExampleDefinition (B1 Level)Dutch Translation
InterpretationHer interpretation of the poem was very interesting.The way someone explains or understands something.Interpretatie
NuancedHis nuanced performance added depth to the character.Showing small, important differences.Genuanceerd
ThematicThe thematic focus of the book is on social justice.Related to the main topics or ideas.Thematisch
CritiqueShe wrote a detailed critique of the article.A detailed analysis and assessment.Kritiek
CoherenceThe coherence in her essay made it easy to understand.The quality of being logical and consistent.Samenhang
SubtextThe subtext of his speech was more important than the actual words.The underlying or hidden meaning.Ondertekst
RhetoricalHe asked a rhetorical question, not expecting an answer.A rhetorical device is a linguistic tool that employs a particular type of sentence structure, sound, or pattern of meaning in order to evoke a particular reaction from an audience. Each rhetorical device is a distinct tool that can be used to construct an argument or make an existing argument more compelling.Retorisch
SymbolismThe dove is a symbol of peace.The use of symbols to represent ideas or qualities.Symboliek
MetaphoricalHe described the city as a jungle, which is a metaphorical expression.Using words or phrases to mean something different than literal.Metaforisch
AllegoryThe story is an allegory for the journey of life.A story, poem, or picture with a hidden meaning.Allegorie
ContextualizeTo understand the statement, you need to contextualize it.To consider the situation or environment something is in.Contextualiseren
PerspectiveHis perspective on the issue is quite unique.A particular way of considering something.Perspectief
AnalyticalHer analytical skills help her solve complex problems.Relating to analyzing or using logic and reason.Analytisch
InsightfulHis comments were very insightful.Showing a deep understanding of things.Inzichtelijk
IronyThe irony is that the fire station burned down.The use of words that mean the opposite of what you really think, for example, there are many types of irony!Ironie
NarrativeThe narrative of the film was compelling.A story or a description of a series of events.Verhaal
ConnotationsThe word “home” has connotations of warmth and safety.The ideas or feelings that a word makes you think about.Connotaties
SubversiveHis subversive ideas challenged the status quo.Seeking or intended to undermine an established system.Subversief: ondermijnend, ontwrichtend, gericht op het omverwerpen van het gezag
MotifsRecurring motifs in his paintings include birds and trees.A repeated design, pattern, or idea.Motieven (zoals motief: een patroon)
ArticulateShe was able to articulate her thoughts clearly. The text articulates what many people have been feeling. Able to express thoughts and feelings easily and clearly.Welbespraakt / brengt over
CharacterizationThe author’s characterization of the protagonist was very detailed.The way an author presents and develops characters in a story.Karakterisering
StructuralThe narrative style provided a structural example of the mental illness described in the book.Relating to the way something is built or organized.Structureel
ComparativeHis comparative study of cultures was fascinating.Relating to comparing things.Vergelijkend
GenreShe prefers books in the fantasy genre.A style or category of art, music, or literature.Genre
ParadigmThis discovery will shift the paradigm in our understanding of physics.a world view underlying the theories and methodology of a particular scientific subject.Paradigma: een samenhangend stelsel van modellen en theorieën waarbinnen de werkelijkheid beschreven wordt. Met andere woorden: het is de manier waarop wij de werkelijkheid ervaren.

Grammar

Writing with Cohesion and Coherence: A Comprehensive Guide

Hello students! Today, we are diving into two essential elements of effective writing: cohesion and coherence.

What are Cohesion and Coherence? 🔗

  • Cohesion: It’s the way ideas and relationships are linked within a text.
  • Coherence: It refers to the logical and consistent organization of ideas in a text.
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Why Are They Important?

  1. Clarity: They help in making your writing easy to understand.
  2. Flow: They give your text a logical flow, making it pleasant to read.
  3. Strength: They help in reinforcing your argument or main idea.

How to Achieve Cohesion and Coherence?

  • Transitional Phrases: Use phrases like ‘however,’ ‘in addition,’ ‘firstly,’ etc.
  • Pronouns: Use pronouns to refer back to previously mentioned subjects.

Exercises Await!

You’ll find exercises that require you to practise cohesion and coherence in different contexts. Make sure you check them out and practice with them below. Once you’re confident about how to use them, do the quiz at the bottom!

Are you ready to master this topic? Let’s get started! 🚀

Glossary (click to open):
  1. Argument: A reason or set of reasons to support an idea.
  2. Clarity: Being clear and easy to understand.
  3. Coherence: Logical and consistent connection of ideas.
  4. Cohesion: The act of sticking or holding together.
  5. Diving into: Exploring or studying something deeply.
  6. Effective: Successful in producing a result.
  7. Elements: Parts or aspects of something.
  8. Essential: Very important.
  9. Flow: The smooth progress of ideas or events.
  10. In addition: Also or furthermore.
  11. Main Idea: The most important point or concept in a text.
  12. Pleasant: Nice or enjoyable.
  13. Practice: To do something repeatedly to get better at it.
  14. Pronouns: Words like ‘he,’ ‘she,’ ‘it,’ used instead of a noun.
  15. Refer Back: To talk about something mentioned earlier.
  16. Reinforcing: Making something stronger.
  17. Transitional Phrases: Words or phrases that help move from one idea to another.
Exercises (click to view)
Exercise No.InstructionExample Sentence/PassageBlank/Fill-in-the-Blank
1Identify the cohesive device.First of all, we need to consider the facts.Cohesive device: ________
2Complete the sentence with a suitable conjunction.He is a good athlete. ________, he is also an excellent student.________
3Identify the topic sentence.Paragraph about the importance of exercise.Topic sentence: ________
4Add a transitional phrase.She loves reading. She reads every day.She loves reading. ________, she reads every day.
5Rearrange the sentences for coherence.a) Finally, he succeeded. b) First, he tried hard. c) Then, he faced setbacks.________
6Complete the sentence with a suitable pronoun.John loves reading. ________ reads three books a week.________
7Add a conclusion sentence.Paragraph about benefits of vegetables.Conclusion sentence: ________
8Identify the logical connector.He was tired; therefore, he went to bed.Logical connector: ________
9Add a sentence that supports the main idea.Main idea: Exercise is important for health.Supporting sentence: ________
10Identify the cohesive device.On the other hand, some people disagree.Cohesive device: ________
11Add a transitional phrase.I like swimming. I don’t like running.I like swimming. ________, I don’t like running.
12Complete the sentence with a suitable conjunction.She is intelligent. ________, she is hardworking.________
13Identify the topic sentence.Paragraph about the dangers of smoking.Topic sentence: ________
14Rearrange the sentences for coherence.a) She finally completed it. b) She started a project. c) She faced many challenges.________
15Add a conclusion sentence.Paragraph about the importance of education.Conclusion sentence: ________
16Complete the sentence with a suitable pronoun.Emily loves painting. ________ paints every weekend.________
17Identify the logical connector.It was raining; however, the game continued.Logical connector: ________
18Add a sentence that supports the main idea.Main idea: Reading is beneficial.Supporting sentence: ________
19Identify the cohesive device.In conclusion, we must take action.Cohesive device: ________
20Add a transitional phrase.He likes to travel. He has been to many countries.He likes to travel. ________, he has been to many countries.
Answers (click to view)
Exercise No.Answer
1First of all
2Moreover/Furthermore
3[Depends on the paragraph]
4Therefore/Consequently
5First, he tried hard. Then, he faced setbacks. Finally, he succeeded.
6He
7[Depends on the paragraph]
8therefore
9[Depends on the main idea]
10On the other hand
11However/On the contrary
12Additionally/Furthermore
13[Depends on the paragraph]
14She started a project. She faced many challenges. She finally completed it.
15[Depends on the paragraph]
16She
17however
18[Depends on the main idea]
19In conclusion
20For example/For instance

Want to learn more related to this topic?

Mining Expeditions

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Task: Write an engaging essay about your experience with Let’s Grow! in Year 5A. Earn between 100-200 GEMs for your insightful thoughts.

What to Include in Your Essay:

  1. Overall Evaluation: Share your detailed thoughts on how effective Let’s Grow! is. Consider everything you’ve used in Year 5A – both the specific materials and the entire system.
  2. Underlying Concepts: Discuss the ideas, scientific principles, and theories that Let’s Grow! is based on. Reflect on how these elements impact your learning.
  3. Language Use: Use expressive and varied language in your essay. Include elements like metaphors to make your writing more interesting.
  4. Structure Analysis: Analyze how the structure of Let’s Grow! helps or hinders your learning. Give clear examples to support your views.
  5. Reasoned Argument: Present well-thought-out reasons for your opinions. Make sure your arguments are logical and convincing.
  6. Understanding Intentions: Think about the goals and intentions behind Let’s Grow! Explain how these intentions are reflected in the platform and how they affect your learning experience.

Remember: Your essay should be a deep and thoughtful examination of Let’s Grow!, going beyond basic observations to provide a rich, critical analysis.

This task has been partially enriched by the contributions of pupils from Class 4A during the academic year 2022-2023. A warm thank you goes out to Jinte en Marit for their invaluable input (only the Let’s Grow! reviewing part of the essay/the mining expedition). While the final task may not mirror the entirety or key aspects of the ideas you provided, your insights, combined with those from other pupils and aligned with the logistical and legal frameworks, played a crucial role in shaping this task. Your collaborative spirit is highly appreciated and recognized in the unfolding of this task.